Hung. thoughts and constructive feedback!

“Hung” is about two young teenagers, a boy, Armando and a girl, Elena who found a very interesting satanic book at an old thrift shop and decided to do a ritual from the book that did not end well for either one of them.

1.      FADE IN ON:  Interior. Bed room.

It is around 7:30, Elena picks up the phone and dials Armando’s phone number. The phone rings three times and Armando picks up on the other line.

Elena: Hi Armando, what are you doing tonight?

Armando: Hey, I don’t have any plans; my parents are away for the weekend.

Elena: Great. My parents are going out for date night around 9:30; do you want to come over?

Armando: Yeah, sure, have the book ready. I’ll be there around 10:15.

Elena: Sounds good, see you then.

Elena hangs up the phone, and starts cleaning her room. She is becoming excited but still a little scared. After she is done cleaning her room, she will walk over to her night stand and take a look at the big, brown book with engravings on it. The camera moves in on her hands as she runs her fingers over the engravings slowly.  After flipping through the book she closes it and leaves it on the night stand until it is time.

Elena parents are putting their coats on by the front door, they kiss give her a kiss on her forehead, open the door and leave. 30 mins later, Armando arrives. They greet each other.

Elena: Hey, are you ready for this?

Armando: Yes, let’s go to your room.

Armando and Elena rush over to her bedroom, shaking in anticipation.

When they get to her room, Armando begins to read the instructions from the book:

Armando: The room must be in complete darkness, with candles lit in a circle where the person performing the spell must sit within.

Elena closes all of the windows, pulls the curtains to cover, turns off all the light and lights 6 candles in a circle. Both Armando and Elena sit in the middle, facing each other and the book is placed in the middle of them.

They join hands and looking down at the book they began to read out loud together.